Tutoring Section 3 with Michaella
Date/Time: March 28, 2016/ 3:30 p.m. -4:30 p.m.
Location: Starbucks near the Trader Joe’s on the Tennessee Street
Topic/Skill: Grammar, Persuasive Essay/Persuasive Essay
Writing Practice
Feedback provided to tutee: Michaella gave me the format of
persuasive essay. The format is:
Intro
-attention grabber
-explain topic
-thesis statement (it must support your point of view)
Body (3 body paragraphs):
-topic sentence
-detail support
-possible counterargument
Conclusion:
-summarize key points
-restate thesis
Lesson(s) about tutoring and/or the tutee you learned: Persuasive
writing practice which Michaella gave me, has four questions. I choose this
question: “Do you think technology has been beneficial or harmful to our society?”
I wrote an outline, then I composed my writing. Because of a
word count limitation in blogs, I
share with you my attention grabber,
topic sentences for each paragraph:
An attention grabber:
“As an early morning riser, I use my cell phone’s alarm clock
most days.”
Topic sentence for each paragraph:
The technology maintains job expansion……
Technology also is a good way to communicate….
The accessibility of knowledge is very easy with
technology….
Technology is very effective learning tool for education….
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