Tutoring Section 1 with Michaella
Date/Time: March 21, 2016/ 4:00p.m.-5:00p.m.
Location: Starbucks near the CIES on the Tennessee Street
Topic/Skill: Grammar/Correct the grammar errors, prepare to
write!, and to write an essay
Feedback provided to tutee: Michaella brought me an exercise
to write an essay. First, I read an essay to correct the errors. Second, I
wrote answers to the questions for a preparation to writing. Third, I wrote an
essay by using the sentence patterns: although/even though and (not) …at all. In
every step, my tutor gave me feedbacks.
Lesson(s) about tutoring and/or the tutee you learned: Verb
tense, punctuation, and conjunctions are important in English writing. Past
tense and simple present tense are common tenses to use. I wrote this essay:
My Favorite Place by Isik Akyollu Denizman
I have a very busy life. I take care of my family. I teach
four classes at Southern Regional Technical College in Thomasville, Georgia. I
commute to work from Tallahassee to Thomasville for half an hour. There are the
reasons; my favorite place is my home. Even though my job is in
Thomasville, my home is very close to the border of the state of Georgia.
Driving to work is not boring at all. Although I have a very hectic work
schedule, I spend good times with my family, and I can relax, listen to music,
and read a book. I can see peace and harmony in my home.
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