Isik TS#6 with Mitchell Hudson

Tutoring Section 6 with Mitchell Hudson

Date/Time: March 29, 2016/ 10:50 a.m.-11:50 a.m.

Location: CIES

Topic/Skill: A Persuasive writing/ to write a persuasive composition and to continue to diagnostic test

Feedback provided to tutee: Mitchell brought me several questions to write a persuasive composition. I had chosen the question which is “what is your opinion about your cell phone?” I wrote the composition. Mitchell read it and gave me feedbacks.

Lesson(s) about tutoring and/or the tutee you learned:  I worked on my “topic sentence.”  First, I wrote “My cell phone is a necessity for my daily communication and interaction with people.” Mitchell suggested me to be specific for the daily communication and interaction. I changed my topic sentence to “Cell phones are a necessity for daily communication and social media interaction.” This is using precise language and active voice.  I talked about a daily communication in my first paragraph and social media interaction in my second paragraph.